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PeterWiggin Resident PenIs MC	posted 05-14-2001 16:20 this is a freestyle written rhyme of frusteration. i blow up schools for fun, watch the kids run, while this administrator runs his mouth, like some wrestling fagget from the south, about how its not feasible, how about you eat fecise and regurgitate them on the easil, put his back on the canvass, rip his torso apart, and call it art, "finish him" is where i start, this combat with a mortal, my words are scornful, his bullshit is corn-full, and ill never digest this nonsense, what is this a contest, ill make his back convext the match my facial expression, the context is out of order, wish this lesson was shorter, snipe his fuckin head, now that my cause is dead, i have to make a run for the border. die. peter,wiggin,out IP: Logged
Bitchgoddess battin' .500	posted 05-14-2001 16:39 I won't comment on the disturbing content of your rhyme, but I will comment on your atrocious spelling and grammar. Here is a list of the correct spelling of some of your lyrics: frustration faggot fecies easel convex And your grammar and punctuation... well, you can probably figure that out if you try to read it aloud. ------------------ ~Bitch~ IP: Logged
Bex Delicate Flower	posted 05-14-2001 16:47 it's feces. IP: Logged
eod TREAT MERIGHT!	posted 05-14-2001 16:56 Well if it is freestyle, you aren't going to go back and fix small errors.. Then it isn't freestyle.. I'm sure everyone is aware of what freestyle is.. [This message has been edited by eod (edited 05-14-2001).] IP: Logged
Bitchgoddess battin' .500	posted 05-14-2001 17:11 You're right Bex, typo, sorry. It's really bad to have a typo when you're correcting someone else's spelling huh? As far as i know freestyle means that you don't write it down, and do it off the top of your head, hence the written word cannot be freestyle. And I just dislike most rap in general, especially those who tend towards violence with no underlying message. IP: Logged
fenomas argument nazi	posted 05-14-2001 17:46 I read somewhere that Jack Kerouac used to boast that he never read over anything he wrote; he just wrote it and sent it to the publisher... And when Hemingway heard this he (famously) remarked, "That's not writing.. that's typing." fen IP: Logged
Snag Leaky Pen	posted 05-14-2001 17:53 I can rhyme All the time And do a jig With a pretty pig But I gotta know Wiggin why you go Rappin' bout killin' da kids When ya could be makin' ebay bids Rappin' bout how you ate some feces Ain't nearly as cool as reese's pieces Word, keep yo jive ass rhymin out my hood Or I'll get nasty and bust ya ass at some snood Bling Bling. ------------------ All your... shut the fuck up. IP: Logged
eod TREAT MERIGHT!	posted 05-14-2001 17:53 I just don't get why you guys have to nitpick someone to death... Jesus christ we are never going to get anybody new in these message boards. Fine he misspelled a few words.. THANK GOD Bitchgoddess was there to make a list of them. I started to freak out when I read it but luckly the next post was bitchgoddess correcting his spelling for us. Lets try this: When someone new comes to the board lets wait until that person posts atleast 5 messages or 1 week (whichever comes first) before you guys rip into them.. IP: Logged
eod TREAT MERIGHT!	posted 05-14-2001 17:54 hahaha snag.. IP: Logged
Sara t1t fl4sh3r - TAKE IT OFF!!	posted 05-14-2001 18:13 Plus that... he's a cool fucking guy... I'm with e0d, back off and give him a chance. IP: Logged
Sara t1t fl4sh3r - TAKE IT OFF!!	posted 05-14-2001 18:35 Furthermore, why does a freestyle thats typed as its thought disqualify it from being titled "freestyle"? I'm sure there is freestyle poetry and prose.. I imagine whether the words are handwritten/typed or otherwise the nature of the "style" remains. IP: Logged
PeterWiggin Resident PenIs MC	posted 05-14-2001 19:21 bitchgoddess kinda snobbish with an eleetist texture i think she took it.... in the ass from webster. now she got great spelling she sees a mistype and her eyes start welling reminicing of the intrusion in her anal cavity why you mad at me? my last ish was real life situations mixed with lack of patience and some folklore. just venting on this board and more your right, its not a freestyle technically it is a keystyle im not in denile. so dont waste your mind correcting a rhyme inspecting and disecting every line find something constructive to do with your time bored whore, you better duck like, four 'skank seeking' axes are coming at your door but its closed like your mind to my frustration i got some postive ish but it hasn't been placed in.. a view that you can see step the fuck off and let me be and whats with ass tag snag? needs to be bound and gagged for dissen, fuck..... oh, its the YOu that im missin and i think your missin your ewe too much time peepin porno's of doo doo. how do you, come with rhymes so retarted. tried to make a parity now im laughin at the scarcity of females in your life heres a knife .... make a slit in your screen cuz thats the only sex youll get unless the sky becomes green fiend ... for bits and bytes and bitmaps of tits at night squinting to remember what they look like in real life. hopin no one closes the door or turns off his nightlight your trite life saddens me its alright your the bad emcee please spit a reply again, hope your not mad at me. PeterWiggin IP: Logged
Bex Delicate Flower	posted 05-14-2001 19:26 Fen, Henry Miller wrote in Tropic of Cancer that he wrote whatever he felt and didn't go back to edit and change things later because it would ruin what he was feeling at the moment he wrote. Granted, he's able to write some amazing stuff, so he can get away with it. That, and the book has a LOT of sex in it so you tend not to notice the little errors. -Bex IP: Logged
zippy Member with a member bigger than the member with a member	posted 05-14-2001 19:39 I think i need to read tropic of cancer. is peterwiggin one of the three icy hot stuntaz? IP: Logged
PeterWiggin Resident PenIs MC	posted 05-14-2001 19:42 yeah werd. i am stereotype me. its funny how you have to refer to a highly solicited internet reference for a joke though.. are you one of those drooling braced faced vasaline on the keyboard types who looks at porn and jacks off to poop pictures all day? PeterWiggin IP: Logged
Snag Leaky Pen	posted 05-14-2001 19:44 Listen up Wiggin I don't need you to be diggin' Down on my peeps Or I'll have to put you to sleeps With my bling bling flow Just like I blow snow I ain't tryin' to front But you is out bein' all blunt This rhyme game ain't my thang I just don't want my peeps to go off with a bang It's been said that you is cool But you sound like a puddle of drool When you callin' people a whore It makes us wanna throw you through da door Now listen up buddy boy I ain't yo play toy I don't like the poo poo And I ain't chill with the doo doo You don't know me So don't try to flame me Let's be chill dawg We don't have to take this to the cranberry bog Stop tossin' out the pain Or we'll be bringin' out da crane To toss you in da mud But, truly, I wanna be yo bud So, let's be chill And flip rhymes that be ill Yours truly The most unruly Illa Illa Snag Bling Bling ------------------ All your... shut the fuck up. IP: Logged
PeterWiggin Resident PenIs MC	posted 05-14-2001 20:19 its ok, you didn't offend me, just sparked some intrest in dissing back. i dont give a flying flock of sheep what you all think of me. (save the few i know in 'real' life)and just for the record.... i write RHYMEs, i freestyle, i make beats, i scratch and blend beats, i love hip hop and drum and bass, and shhhhh.. im white. so talk shit please, i welcome it. the only reason i wrote the rhyme in the first place is becuase my fuckin retarded school wont give me the last 4 credit hours (finance 341) i need to graduate this summer, and the rhyme was about the discussion with my lame ass department head. do you think its irrational to have 45 kids in the class that dont need it to graduate when its the ONLY class I NEED to graduate this summer? cuz i will be such a BURDEn to the other 45 students in the class. RIGHT! so hate me becuase i was pissed off.. and i still will never like bitchgoddess regardless of anything she says ever ever ever ever ever ever. anyone who's so fuckin anal retentive they have to correct someones spelling.. its just sad. if i was writing a term paper id use spell check. and there would be an apostrophe between the i and the d. eat chilie whip PeterWiggin IP: Logged
CapnBiggles clmesdad. stopplease sirmyass is bleeding	posted 05-14-2001 20:36 Why can't we all just get along? IP: Logged
fenomas argument nazi	posted 05-14-2001 20:39 snag: ..cranberry bog... hee hee! fen IP: Logged
Clme cake fiend	posted 05-14-2001 21:23 I like spell check. Makes my words all purty... just like my favorite goat, Mildred. My goat turned on me though... she likes Mightymon better now, the filthy whore. The goats a filthy whore too. -Chris [This message has been edited by Clme (edited 05-14-2001).] IP: Logged
Bitchgoddess battin' .500	posted 05-14-2001 21:43 Hmmm.... the second rhyme was much better, even if it was at my expense. It was funny. And Eod, I am the spelling pnoughtsie, always have been. You should have seen the wars at the PoB clan message board last year, it was hilarious. I still don't think that anything written can be freestyle, but that's just my opinion, and we all know that opinions are like assholes so I won't argue the point. I am really intoxicated at the moment, so unless there's anything else new on the board I'm off to eat some swiss rolls and pass out on the couch. IP: Logged
Clme cake fiend	posted 05-14-2001 21:57 I've been known to go on 10 minute free-association sprees. Normally not a problem until I get drunk and do it in a chatroom. People really get pissed then. Is free association freestyle? It doesn't rhyme or make any sort of sense, but it isn't edited at all IP: Logged
fenomas argument nazi	posted 05-14-2001 23:09 Y'know, I wouldn't say I'm a spelling nazi, although I am the sort of person who rarely mistakes "its" for "it's", but just off the top o me head: Written english is the language of the web as we know it, right? So poor English skills = poor communication skills. Obviously the web has developed its own rules regarding this stuff, and even the most elequent often don't bother to capitalize... but spelling is a part of clear expression, isn't it? If I criticized some hick who said, "Ah ain't a-much with yer edjumuhcation" then you wouldn't call me a pronunciation nazi, would you? On the other hand, we could all give in to this dude: http://www.freespeling.com/ fen IP: Logged
psyci Gr4ph1c4l P3nn3r	posted 05-14-2001 23:43 U SPELLIN': AWFUL IP: Logged
PeterWiggin Resident PenIs MC	posted 05-15-2001 00:11 first off for bitchynitpickygoddless you said, "I still don't think that anything written can be freestyle, but that's just my opinion." now to quote myself from the very first post. "this is a freestyle 'written' rhyme of frusteration.".. now you can get MORE technical and say that this written rhyme isn't a freestyle. which is a valid point. the only reason i said it was a freestyle was to separate it from the fact that i have written and revised full length rhymes, and this one happened to be a spur of the moment sort of thing......sorry about the confusion.. hope your anal nether region gets lubricated and loosened up so you can understand! secondly fenomas. "So poor English skills = poor communication skills".. did you not understand what i typed? are you ignorant or semi-retarded? why do i have to attack people to get my point across? who are you, and why the eff did you bother posting with some tarded ish like that. your going to claim on spelling and such and your post had many-a-error. so get off your high horse and saddle up on the couch slouch. and freespelling is wak.. try dictionary.com even better. bible.com find a religion to save you from this grammerical tragedy before your eyes. "for the rest of em, i give em just enough to cause infection."~slug PeterWiggin PS:why do you drive me to be an asshole on the first thread i post? simple minded shit like spelling, or VULGER rhymes when theres fuckin post of porn with people pooping on eachothers faces. calling me a iceyhotboy or whatever when theres...... posts of people POOPING ON EACHOTHERS FACES!!!! IP: Logged

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