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Topic: i blow up schools and kill kids...................
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PeterWiggin
Resident PenIs MC
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posted 06-13-2001 17:00
   
well for all you people that didn't like my last verse because i was pissed off at my school... i offer this verse, thats actually on a track, and i will give it away as soon as its put together and mastered.. and if you pick on my spelling you know where you can stick it............................
trying to see the perspective
or the view
from my point of reference
is something you cannot do
its not plausible
not close to possible
or even talkable, and this is not new
when only seeing the sheeth
its hard to fathom whats beneath
the physical features
creating my equation
without G's and A's or T's
because I "C" past the helix
the stiuations mix
eternally stuck with my combination, fixed
try to sum me up but missed...
the calculations in the math
recreating whats been stated
aligning tangents with your path
passed up the answer
to make a stance
on nothing but a glance
double take some time
offer every mask a chance
cuz we exist with different genes
and choose different pants
to rock in this life dance
advance .........but dont
tangle with my angle
and act obtuse, im acute
to the use of generalizations
and for that,
i have no patients
standing waiting for some room
to share my insights of inner fights
everyone can relate to
a little bit
when the spittle hits the condensor
hopefully it touches the sensor
in your main frame, my main aim
to tell you that the individual game
is compiled through miles
of experience and no one can explain
their own joy pleasure or pain
cuz this language is too limited
and words are very primitive
when compared to emotion
complexity is the notion im conveying
so stop claimin i feel you.
when you listen to what im saying.
.................................. TELOS IP: Logged |
fenomas
argument nazi
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posted 06-13-2001 17:48
i'm hot like a bottle of picante...
i'm deeper than..
dante..
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zippy
Member with a member bigger than the member with a member
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posted 06-13-2001 20:35
yo, i have a big dick
i click my dick on the net, yo
it makes girls go crazyedit:
good girl yes,
bad girl no [This message has been edited by zippy (edited 06-13-2001).] IP: Logged |
PeterWiggin
Resident PenIs MC
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posted 06-13-2001 21:01
zippy...
>shaking head<
what the?
sad you are.
>pat zippy on his head<
ooh.. forgot about the soft spotmy bad Peter PS: thanks for the constructive criticism too, i appreciate it... just because it rhymes, doesn't mean you have to rhyme in your reply... sheep. IP: Logged |
Bitchgoddess
battin' .500
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posted 06-13-2001 21:07
Impressive. The lack of violence is a plus, and aside from the spelling errors which I can forgive, it looks great. Good luck.IP: Logged |
homerjay
PenIs
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posted 06-14-2001 02:14
that looks good peter, i'd love to hear the track when you finish it.------------------
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